I have a few erotic short stories I’m working on, and in one of them I’ve arrived to the sex scene. During outlining it, I questioned if the guy should cum multiple times. Is it hotter if they don’t, or does the lack of realism take you out of the story?

Are there any other porn-logic tropes in stories that turn you on or off?

      • shastaxc@lemm.ee
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        8 months ago

        Maybe they’re just inefficient. Why do it twice when you could just get it all out in 1 go? I prefer the firehouse method.