In my opinion, you could clean up the design, make it a bit less like a human sketched it. I think the rays of the sun would look better with a white outline as well. These are just stylistic choices that I would make and you’re free to ignore.
What I would definitely like to ask you to reconsider is the name of this fictional place. “Oriental” has picked up a few negative connotations in English, crossing into racist abuse on occasion. I’m sure you don’t want that attached to your nice design.
In my opinion, you could clean up the design, make it a bit less like a human sketched it. I think the rays of the sun would look better with a white outline as well. These are just stylistic choices that I would make and you’re free to ignore.
What I would definitely like to ask you to reconsider is the name of this fictional place. “Oriental” has picked up a few negative connotations in English, crossing into racist abuse on occasion. I’m sure you don’t want that attached to your nice design.
oh my god, I didn’t know! thanks. It will now be called Terra del Sol